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Who?

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dandiliondrifter
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Who?
That's the question
But isn't it always?
Who
     Am
         I
Or was it
Who
     Was
         That
Or maybe
Who
     Are
        You
Who?
Its the general term for the unnoticed, unnamed, and unknown
A beautiful word that can strip
                                       Everyone,
                                                   And Anyone
                                                                  Of Individuality
I believe that's
Who
      I
       Am
Or perhaps it's
Who
     You
         Are
But I think it's
Who
     That
          Was
Not that any of this really matters
But,
The matter of
Who?
Can't be solved unless you know
You
    Or Him
            Or Her
Maybe...
This is just me attempting to follow my train of thought on the word who or really the question who. Please comment Id love to know what you think. :)
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schongslipper
I have to say I don't think this is your strongest. I love the format, but I feel like the end isn't consistant with "A beautiful word that can strip / Everyone / And Anyone / Of Individuality." I also felt like it could be edited and worded better. Still a great concept though.
(Also I promise I'll do the meme thing)